Thursday, October 14, 2010

Leopard seal attack
after i got attacked by the leapord seal i was scared that it was going to come back and finish the job on me but then we started walking back i seen the seal again so i ran but not fast but i tried to run we seen our camping place and we called the people that were there they were the people that had to watch us like there our sucurity then they came and grabbed me and my friend jon got pulled into the water and we never seen jon after that but we knew the bast was going to come back so we waited because we were gonna try put a camera on the seal.  first by doing that were gonna put the the beast to sleep with a sleeping dart.  then put the camera on it so we can see what he does or where it sleeps

3 comments:

  1. Hi Cody. You have to go back through your story and do some more editing. Look specifically at your sentence structure. There are a lot of run on sentences and also always remember to capitalize "I".

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