Thursday, October 21, 2010
daniel,s story question
I agree with Daniel because hope is more important than bread. If you hope to survive and to not die you will not die and think of savior you could survive the hole thing. If you have no hope you just gonna end up dead . If you hope you could survive longer and think positive and Daniel would help people for example Daniel is helping kids when there dad is steeling there bread and the kids are starving so now Daniel and Rosa took the dads bread. The dad of the kids that stole bread he thinks bread is more important than hope because he is taking his kids bread then he died. Thats why hope is more important than bread because you think savior is on the way.
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Cody, I like your topic sentence because it lets the reader know what your paragraph is about. You're gone to have to keep on working on proper sentence structure, editing and grammar. Remember to always have a capital letter to begin a sentence.
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